Friday 6 November 2020

Review of Cut (author: Patricia McCormick)

(TW: self harm)


I first read this book in English at High School when I was around 13. I remembered it being about a girl called Callie who cut herself and was in a mental health place. I wanted to read it again because I couldn't remember why Callie did it. 

I enjoyed my re-read as an adult, but I wasn't convinced by the ending: the reason of why Callie started talking as the trigger didn't seem real, and the overall reason for her mental illness didn't feel that it fit her age. The story itself was interesting, compelling, but very short and lacking in some areas. The girl, Callie, stopped talking and resorted to cutting herself as a form of relief. Her therapist was trying to get her to talk but nothing worked. 

I enjoyed the other characters but wanted more from them. Their personalities did show but it was mostly through their illnesses and not through their hobbies and other details. Although it is a short book, this could have been done in a few sentences. 

There were a couple of editing issues: some of the pages have designs which made it hard to see the words, and there were a few typos which is normal but for such a short book it felt lazy. 

Lastly, I was underwhelmed by the ending. We found out why Callie stopped talking and cut but it didn't feel like something a girl of her age would react to the way she did. 

3/5 Rating.

Monday 12 October 2020

Review of Wheel of Time: Eye of the World (author: Robert Jordan)

Overall, I did enjoy this book. It was long and slow but was a fun read. There were some similarities to The Fellowship of the Ring where Jordan no doubt took inspiration (he's known to have been inspired by Lord of the Rings), such as the village being attacked, a stranger with powerful magic leading them on a quest in a group with the MC's friends, and heading for a ferry. It was a fun allusion and worked.

I enjoyed Rand, the main character. He had a good starting for character development for the beginning of a series and is a nice person to get behind. 

Mat was a lot of fun and his cheeky, mischievous nature made him an excellent character who I loved to read about interacting with Rand. It was also interesting watching him change. I managed to work out what happened because of his nature. 

I wasn't as keen on Perrin. He had an interesting journey but I didn't enjoy his POV as much. 

Egwene was annoying in many ways. Whilst she seemed to be a nice character overall. she was quite harsh to Rand and didn't always give him a chance to explain something. She was similar with Perrin. 

Moiraine was a good character for introducing and explaining the magic and the world. She was a confusing and nice character. You can't be sure of her motives because of numerous warnings but she seemed trustworthy. 

Lan was similar to Moiraine in introducing word knowledge characters. They were both good as powerful protectors for the group. 

Nynaeve was a complicated character. She was very good for showing the extend of magic from the village compared to the rest of the world. She was quite annoying for being so stubborn but she had good reason for it seeing as she had little to no reason to trust Moiraine but learned through the story. 

There were a lot of side and one time characters who worked well for the story. I found it added to it without being confusing. 

The ending did feel rushed. The title of the book had hardly any page time and didn't feel significant to the climax of the story. 

The revelation was interesting and promised far more character development, world exploration and magic. Even if it was quick. 

I've heard people saying that certain chapters and parts of the story didn't need to be in it. Whilst they weren't vital to the plot, they did give fun character interaction and showed just how long their journey was. 

I'd certainly recommend this book to fantasy lovers who want a long journey and I look forward to reading more Wheel of Time. 


4/5 Rating

Wednesday 5 July 2017

An Odd Beginning for A Life of Writing

Deciding how to hold the pen and what my hand-writing looked like took me a long time. I never had dyslexia, dyspraxia or any learning disability, I was just indecisive and paid too much attention to the way others wrote. This wasn’t particularly helped by my other talent, either: I’m ambidextrous. I love being ambidextrous. I remember switching between hands when I was learning to write and copying other people’s writing styles. I found an art for different writing forms and loved to experiment with shaping the letters differently. This fascination with pen-man ship would partially form my love for writing.

All through my childhood, I had a love for magic. The thought of being able to control things with your mind or do things that others couldn’t fascinated me. I don’t actually remember which I discovered first, The Worst Witch or Harry Potter, but they shaped my childhood and filled my head with all sorts of magic and characters. I loved reading and watching the characters learn magic, cast spells, fly on broom sticks, stand up to bullies and be surrounded by friends. The characters weren’t so in-depth in The Worst Witch but Harry Potter saw character growth and back story with its own world to get lost in.

My primary school was tiny, so lack of friends was a bit of an issue when everybody knew each other so, with a bit of influence from a girl at a neighbouring school commenting on their friend groups, I invented some characters for myself and played out their shenanigans in my head. It wasn’t all magical, at first. It started off as an escape mechanism. I still retreated to my favourite stories, but having my own characters with sole control over them was an outlet I valued. Little did I know that the primary characters from this would grow up with me to become the main inspiration for my fantasy novels.

My characters played out in my head at first, or I acted it out with imaginary people (I used to want to be an actor!), and it developed into writing down plans for what happened. Having pets and magic featured a lot in what I planned in my notebooks. Eventually, my mum suggested I write the stories of what I imagined and planned. I was never good at how to start them and I never stuck to one story because I kept thinking up new ideas.

When I was eleven, I found Star Trek: Voyager and fell in love with the show! The spaceships were different, the setting was a futuristic utopia with space exploration and battles. Watching the Star Trek series ignited my love for science fiction. They lived by good moral principles, had abolished famine and currency, were in a united federation of planets which brought a whole sense of community and there was plenty of story line and fighting. Through Star Trek, I found Star Wars, Firefly and a general love for space-dwelling science-fiction.

I finally settled my writing style and how to hold the pen when I was in sixth form. I still play with calligraphy and fancy writing styles but found my own style. I also found my love for creative writing in the form of wanting to be an author rather than just wanting to put my ideas on a notepad. Finding the Creative and Professional Writing course at University was what I needed, especially after trying to think of what career I wanted (and a lot of eighteen year olds have no idea), and I learned a lot from the lecturers and other students.



Everything that I experience in my childhood, most of which hasn’t made it to this blog entry, transformed me into a fantasy writer. 

Wednesday 14 June 2017

A Peek At What Is To Come

Writing a blog is difficult when you want to write one but are unsure what you want to blog about. I’m lots of things, but a writer is the main thing, and I’m not one to publish my stories online if I’m going to want to earn a living from them. Problematic for a budding young author, but there are lots of topics to write about. I’m also highly critical of my writing so any tips and constructive criticism are welcome and encouraged.

I love fantasy and science fiction, so think Lord of the Rings, Dungeons and Dragons, Star Trek and Star Wars and you have a reasonable idea of what I’m in to.

I’m currently writing a series of fantasy novels set in a skewy version of our world in which magic is common place and politics is getting awkward. I’ve been planning and writing different parts of these stories since I was in school and they have merged with my more recent ideas to exist in one world. I aim for this world to be rather huge.

I play D&D 5e with some friends in which I play a Human Cleric alongside a Human Druid with an annoying, talking sword, an Elvish Wizard, a Dwarf Barbarian, an Imp Rogue with an addiction to food and mayhem and a Bardic Kobald. What could possibly go wrong? With 1 DM and 3 players who have a habit of saving one-off NPCs and adopting them as characters: so much!